At the moment, the band scene in this video looks too much like it's pretending to be in gig, whereas i either need to make it look like it's a band playing at a house party, or a gig.
Also because there is only one narrative character it may look too boring, and it might not establish the plot enough, so i have got to incorporate another character e.g. the girlfriend, to show that the relationship has ended. This could be shown with her inside the house looking through the telecom at him. I could also put an interval in the song where she tells him that it is over, which could make it easier for the audience to understand the plot.
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